Student writing

One of our classrooms students wrote a short blog story in our ning community. This is written by a grade 3 students who loves to express herself and to share her ideas.

I am reposting it here to share with all of you. Please leave feeback for Heel!

The night the farmers thought they lost thier son.

One snowy night at a poor farmers house, there was a fire and the farmer had a little boy and animals who loved being in the barn. The farmer told his wife immediately, then ran to the barn, freed all the animals but couldn’t find his son. His son freed himself. His mom and dad did not know that he did. They both sat asking themselves, ”why our son?” They started to cry when there son came in and asked, ”why are you crying?” They turned around and looked its you!, its really you! The little boy said, ”tomorrow is Christmas eve and we did not decorate.” Mom said ”your right!” So dad went to get a christmas tree, mom got the decorations out, then dad came home with the Christmas tree, the little boy decorated the tree, dad put the star on top, mom wrapped presents and they all decorated outside. Mom made hot chocolate while the little boy and dad had a snow fight. Then Santa came and they all lived happily ever after.

THE END.

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